This story is kind of similar to the end of one of my stories. The problem I have with my story is that it kind of comes out of nowhere with no foreshadowing or evidence that it’s possible in the universe the story takes place in. I think I get away with it if I find the right place to submit it too. drabblecast rejected it and now that I have a better understanding of their format I don’t blame them. I love your story though. It could almost be a sequel. Would you like to read mine and see what you think? The coincidence is uncanny.